Monday, July 8, 2013

The Hunt


The day was morbidly cold, the wind was slowly picking up. Snow was seen everywhere for miles. It felt as if my hands were frozen to the rifle; as if the rifle itself had become a part of my body. The wind seemed to sting my exposed face. I tried to ignore the feeling and focus all my attention on my task. I looked carefully down the sight. There was nothing to be seen. I had been laying here for what seemed like hours now with nothing but the insulation of my heavy coat to keep me warm. I let out a long sigh at the disappointment. Then, just as I was about to pack up and call it a day, I saw the wolf. I tried to adjust my aim, but I was too unsteady. I could feel myself starting to get nervous and trembling. I tried to calm myself down from the excitement of finally seeing some prey in a long time. I couldn’t let this moment go to waste. I couldn’t wait any longer. I inhaled deeply and then held it in; my aim was beginning to steady. The wolf was lined up perfectly now. I couldn’t hesitate any longer; this had to be in one smooth motion. I took the shot and tried to keep the rifle steady after the recoil in case if I would have to fire again. The wolf quickly flinched in pain, and then dropped to ground. I walked over to its corpse in excitement that I would finally be able to feed my village tonight. I quickly pulled out my knife and dug it into the wolf’s skin, slowly carving out the amount of meat I needed. I then placed the large ball of meat in my leather bag, sealed it up tightly, and began heading back home.

4 comments:

  1. I love the description of 'morbidly cold.' It's so original and something that I can definitely feel as I read it!

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  2. I was pleasantly surprised at how quick-paced your details were. They were really descriptive, but the story kept moving. =)

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  3. Great job with describing the coldness of the scene; I could almost feel the chill.

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  4. You did a great job moving your story while still being heavily descriptive. I could feel the cold as I read this.

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